April 14th, 1912.
Good job on story about resignation of Understeward For Furniture Positioning Andrew Card and replacement with former Assistant Silverware Steward Joshua Bolten. Running on page one.
Liked emphasis on declining popularity of Captain as reflected by passenger polls on arrangement of deck chairs.
But side-story about iceberg had to be cut — readers have no interest. Unless — work an angle that appearance of iceberg is Captain’s fault?
Or maybe iceberg is actually myth put out by senior members of crew to cover up incompetence…?
Look forward to next dispatch.